FIX dms qc figure captions to make the less sucky

tex/thesis.tex

@@ -1937,7 +1937,6 @@ appeared that the \gls{mab} binding was quadratically related to biotin binding
 critical to controlling the amount and \glspl{mab} and thus the amount of signal
 the T cells receive downstream.
 
-% FIGURE these caption titles suck
 % FIGURE combine this DOE figure into one interaction plot
 \begin{figure*}[ht!]
   \begingroup
@@ -1949,8 +1948,8 @@ the T cells receive downstream.
   \phantomsubcaption\label{fig:dms_snb_decay_curves}
 
   \endgroup
-  \caption[\gls{dms} Quality Control]
-  {\gls{dms} quality control investigation and development
+  \caption[\gls{dms} Process Parameters]
+  {Investigation of influential parameters for the \gls{dms} process.
     \subcap{fig:dms_qc_doe}{\gls{doe} investigating the effect of initial mass
       of microcarriers, reaction temperature, and biotin concentration on
       biotin attachment.}